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Looooong first person present-tense stream of consciousness psud-existentialist piece of crap. I like it a lot 
file was too big so I had to divide it in half 
it's not like anyone would read this all the way through anyway... but if you do I'd really appreciate criticism. Be brutal
file was too big so I had to divide it in half it's not like anyone would read this all the way through anyway... but if you do I'd really appreciate criticism. Be brutalMature
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This was just....astounding. I'm not kidding, this is one of the greatest things I've ever read. I've never read a first person in this kind of format, nor have I enjoyed this kind of premise before: the psuedo-god/ignorant populace-but-one scenario. But you captured my attention instantly and it was written just....magnificently. I mean, you can see how Truth is beginning to realize that not only is he different, but his whole world is a lie. It's an astounding transformation to watch.